Monday, April 18, 2011

Lucky Seven on Monday

Here's a look at seven lines in my current WIP.

She reached up to Theo’s waistband, but the sight of his sculpted abs covered in dark hair distracted her. She stretched up on her knees and nuzzled the springy hair on his stomach, swiping a taste of his skin with her tongue. His muscles jerked slightly under her touch. She licked again, and again his muscles clenched. The discovery of her sexual power was heady. She licked again and moaned with pleasure when he responded with another twitch.

“Violet, stop playing with him and take off his pants,” Alec snapped at her.

1 comment:

  1. Cool. I like how you build anticipation. There's a twist, hmm?